The Innocent's Anthem

[Louise]

I feel writing songs has really helped me lately...it seems to come easy to me. And while I was in the shower, I wrote this song. It's about my brother, Jason.

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Every day, I sit and cry (cry, cry, cry)
I wonder what'd it be like to die (die, die die)
But there's one thing on Earth that keeps me alive
And that thing is you.

Every day, it seems to drag on (on, on, on)
I seem to get more and more withdrawn (drawn, drawn, drawn)
But there's one reason why I'm not already gone
And that reason is you.

At a first glance you are just a young child
But without you there'd be no reason to have smiled
(You're my) Strength, better, hey kid I don't know what you're
Doing, but don't stop now.
You're the only thing saving me now.

Every day, I want it to end (end, end, end)
I have no one on whom I can depend (pend, pend, on)
But I have one person that I can truly call friend
And that person is you.

At a first glance you are just a young child
But without you there'd be no reason to have smiled
(You're my) Strength, better, hey kid I don't know what you're
Doing, but don't stop now.
You're the only thing saving me now.

I'm sorry when I've been so mean to you
But I love no one else more than I love you
I don't really know much, about anything at all
But I know for certain, that this much is true.

At a first glance you are just a young child
But without you there'd be no reason to have smiled
(You're my) Strength, better, hey kid I don't know what you're
Doing, but don't stop now.
You're the only thing saving me now. (x2)

Hey kid, don't change, don't stop now.
You're the only thing saving me now.

Go ahead, critique away.

[WishLine]

I'm happy to read another moving song from you, Steph

I can feel the emotion and genuineness in the words you write, and it's touching to hear about how close you are to your brother. It's so nice to see

You ought to keep writing songs to let your emotions out. you seem more upbeat recently and it's great to see

Keep going, Biffle
Wish

[Jadey!]

I love it...Its got so many emotions wrapped into it...And Wishy is right you seem much happier when your writing your emotions into music....An I say if that helps let the lyrics Flow

[I'macoolcat]

Ohh, Steph, its sooo goood! You've got a real talent for song writing.