Post by DaughterofApollo on Sept 17, 2010 21:39:03 GMT -5
So I wanted you guyses opinions on some of my writing. Here are some stories I'm thinking of doing:
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I love you, and you, and you. -Amy Johnson finally got the love of her life, but her best guy friend had been flirting with her. Could this mean something? And what about that new boy, Tanner? He's pretty attractive right?
Trapped in a Manson- 8 teens, one house, no escape. (Based on role play by Christie,Cat,Jenny, and me. But I'm taking out one character. I don't know who yet.)
Black Out -(I am soooooo exited for this one!) Jamie White has it all, popularity,great friends, and leadership. But when a school black out dance goes wrong, a bully appears out from the school. Taunting, and pulling mean pranks on. But they call them the "Surprise Bully, because no one knows who it is. So know all the pressure is on Jamie.
(A little behind the scenes. The thing that happens at the dance kind of reflects to what happens in my school!)
Here is what I have written so far on black out. What do you think?
"Waaaaaaake up Texas! We're going to start your morning off with a little Party in the U.S.A!" The radio announcer said, starting to play Miley Cyrus's "Party in the U.S.A." I jumped out of bed, a huge smile across my face. I am back! I thought in my head.
My grandmother was beginging her "last years," and my mother thought it would be a great idea for me to ditch school for tow weeks to hang out with my grandmother in Europe. And know I was back. Back to Texas, back to school.
I half way ran to my closet to pick out a nice outfit for school. A plaid green shirt,black skinny jeans, and black converse. An average look for Texans.
I humed to the tun as I got my self ready for the day. My best friend, Jason, had given me all the school work I needed, so I would be all caught up.
Jay B.W. was a small-ish Jr. High. I was a seventh grader here, and head of our student council.
When I arrived my friend Katlyn, ran up and tackle hugged me.
"Heeeey Ms. Europe!" She said to me.
I laughed and replied, "Hey Kate," the nick name I called her. Kate was tall,dark blond hair, green eyed. She was the same age as me at 13 and my best friend since 3rd grade.
"What about me?" My other best friend Jason asked. Jason had been held back in 5th grade to help his,now dead, mother. He was also tall, browned haired, blue eyed.
"Hey." I said taking him in for a one armed hug.
I was to my friends shoulders, brown hair shoulder length, and had peirsing green eyes.
"So do you remember any of you classes?" Jason chuckled.
I laughed back, "Yes." I said. The first bell rang.
"Let's do it!" Kate said.
"Let's." I said walking into the school next to the most important people in my life.
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So waddya think so far?
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I love you, and you, and you. -Amy Johnson finally got the love of her life, but her best guy friend had been flirting with her. Could this mean something? And what about that new boy, Tanner? He's pretty attractive right?
Trapped in a Manson- 8 teens, one house, no escape. (Based on role play by Christie,Cat,Jenny, and me. But I'm taking out one character. I don't know who yet.)
Black Out -(I am soooooo exited for this one!) Jamie White has it all, popularity,great friends, and leadership. But when a school black out dance goes wrong, a bully appears out from the school. Taunting, and pulling mean pranks on. But they call them the "Surprise Bully, because no one knows who it is. So know all the pressure is on Jamie.
(A little behind the scenes. The thing that happens at the dance kind of reflects to what happens in my school!)
Here is what I have written so far on black out. What do you think?
"Waaaaaaake up Texas! We're going to start your morning off with a little Party in the U.S.A!" The radio announcer said, starting to play Miley Cyrus's "Party in the U.S.A." I jumped out of bed, a huge smile across my face. I am back! I thought in my head.
My grandmother was beginging her "last years," and my mother thought it would be a great idea for me to ditch school for tow weeks to hang out with my grandmother in Europe. And know I was back. Back to Texas, back to school.
I half way ran to my closet to pick out a nice outfit for school. A plaid green shirt,black skinny jeans, and black converse. An average look for Texans.
I humed to the tun as I got my self ready for the day. My best friend, Jason, had given me all the school work I needed, so I would be all caught up.
Jay B.W. was a small-ish Jr. High. I was a seventh grader here, and head of our student council.
When I arrived my friend Katlyn, ran up and tackle hugged me.
"Heeeey Ms. Europe!" She said to me.
I laughed and replied, "Hey Kate," the nick name I called her. Kate was tall,dark blond hair, green eyed. She was the same age as me at 13 and my best friend since 3rd grade.
"What about me?" My other best friend Jason asked. Jason had been held back in 5th grade to help his,now dead, mother. He was also tall, browned haired, blue eyed.
"Hey." I said taking him in for a one armed hug.
I was to my friends shoulders, brown hair shoulder length, and had peirsing green eyes.
"So do you remember any of you classes?" Jason chuckled.
I laughed back, "Yes." I said. The first bell rang.
"Let's do it!" Kate said.
"Let's." I said walking into the school next to the most important people in my life.
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So waddya think so far?
